
In the tradition and style of “Retter” and “Cannie,” the third
book “Sterlen” continues the trilogy of the ongoing saga of the Tom
Ammons Family from Cullowhee Mountain and the Wiley I. Owen Family
from Wolf Mountain. The novel introduces the reader to Sterlen
Galloway, a man who carries a banjo on his shoulder as he travels
from house to house in Western North Carolina carrying his songs,
laughter and contentment. And then he chances to meet Marthie
Ammons, a dark unhappy woman whose sadness tears into his heart. It
was only the beginning of a love story that covers the era between
1941 to the blizzard of 1960.
All the characters from Garza’s
previous novels “Retter” and “Cannie” come into play as their lives
are naturally woven into the story of Sterlen. History works in the
lives of the protagonists, continuing through World War II and
beyond, while storytelling, the pain of “birthings” and human
tragedy, mountain living and love of the land lays the ground work
for the love story of Sterlen Galloway and Marthie Ammons. Also
included, in the back of the book, is the authentic lineage of the
author’s mountain families: Ammons, Owen, Bryson, Galloway, and
Coggins.
“I love this place! It’s my little corner of the world.” Marthie
said. To cover her nervousness, she ran around, her arms flying out
as she showed him each section.
“I started comin’ here when I
needed to think on somethin’! The sound o’ the water down below
drowns out the rest o’ the world, ’n’ I kin sorta straighten out my
thoughts. Listen...listen to the waterfall! It’s just a little
farther on.”
She ran before him. Sterlen
gathered his emotions as he followed. He must keep his wits. She
sat down on a rock overlooking a beautiful cave-like rock
indentation in the mountain. From far above, icy, bubbly water fell
like strands of pearls, spraying into a foamy bed of glistening
rock encircled by a fairy ring of greenery.
Marthie smiled up at him;
again they shared the appreciation of each other’s
similarities. He dropped to the rock next to Marthie to feel the
satisfaction of the view.
Suddenly Marthie stood
and, without warning, darted down from their place on the bank,
quickly jumping from rock to rock to stop just in front of the
splashing water. Her hair seemed to float out all around her as she
spun around to sit on the wet rock jutting out from under the
falls. She laughed to the heavens as she flung her head back to
look up at the startled Sterlen. Then, just as quickly, she jumped
up to run back along the same pathway—back to sit beside him.
Breathing hard, Marthie lowered her head onto her lap to get her
breath.
“Yer beautiful, Marthie.”
Sterlen’s voice expressed admiration and a touch of awe. It was all
he could do not to stroke her damp hair. “Yore a little sparrow
sittin’ here beside me. Ye won’t fly away, will ye?” His tone had
become wistful and uncertain.
“I’m not gonna run away,”
laughed Marthie as she lifted her head and looked up at him. “I
jest got the urge to git closer—to touch the water...to touch what
I wuz feelin’. Somehow I feel so peaceful here, jest like bein’ in
my bed on rainy nights and listenin’ to the rain hittin’ the tin
roof above me.”
“It’s peaceful here all right,”
Sterlen replied. He wanted to touch her cheek. “There’s places like
this over to my mountains, too. Do ye think ye’d like to come with
me sometime to visit my place?” As he spoke, Sterlen witnessed the
sudden stiffening of Marthie’s body. He immediately knew he had
already said something amiss.
“Jest cuz I kissed ye cheek the
other day don’t mean....” Marthie began harshly.
“Marthie” Sterlen interrupted.
“I jest want to share my own special place with ye.”
Marthie’s shoulders
visibly slumped. She refused to look at Sterlen, still not
speaking. The sound of the waterfall grew intense, roaring in his
ears.
“Marthie, I felt ye liked me...a
little? Wuz I wrong?” he said.
Still no answer. Marthie kept
her face averted, holding her body still and stiff.
Sterlen pulled himself up and
quietly rose to walk a few steps away. He stood with his back to
her, not speaking, deep in thought. After a long moment, he turned
to look at the woman who had not moved.
“Marthie,” he began, “I reckon
I’ve gone a step too far.”
“No...no, Sterlen. It’s me. I
jump into protectin’ myself, ’n’ then I’m too ashamed to say
I’m...sorry. Please stay.” Her face clear now, she patted the rock
beside her, smiling at him.
He couldn’t believe she had
invited him to stay. He came back, but in doing so, he began to
feel an uneasiness in the back of his mind. He brushed it away.
“What did ye want to talk to me
about, Sterlen?”
In her eyes he could see
it...the coiled blacksnake. That’s all right, he could handle
snakes!
“Marthie, did ye know that if ye
hang a blacksnake, head down, there’ll be rain in two days?”
“No...sure ’nough!” came her
surprised answer. “I gotta remember to ask Daddy if he knows that.
Ye know any more such thangs?”
Sterlen smiled. It felt good to
be back in control of himself.
“Wal, if ye put a four-leaf
clover in yer left shoe, ye’ll met yer intended comin’ down the
road.”
Marthie burst out laughing.
“It’d take ye a month o’ Sundays to find a four-leaf clover! Ye
gotta work fer that one!”
“Have ye ever heard a hen crow,
Marthie?”
“Now yer loco! Ain’t no such
thang as a hen crowing...is there? Well, I’ll ask anyway...what’ll
happen?”
“If ye hear a hen crow, then ye
better kill her..or else we menfolk are in fer a heck o’ a lot o’
trouble!”
Marthie almost fell over
laughing.
Sterlen chuckled, thinking that
he could get this hurt-filled woman to laugh. He’d be good for
her.
Now smiling wide, Marthie said,
“Now, seriously, Sterlen, what did ye want to talk to me about?”
She turned to him eyes that were no longer hard and cold.
“Wal,” suddenly, his hands were
clammy. He stood up. “Wal...I very much like yer company, Marthie.”
He rushed on, “I would like to come a’courtin’, if I could.”
KayKay 5 out of 5 stars
Great story...easy reading
Reviewed in the United States on February 7, 2017
I really like reading about this time period in history. I love the
way she portrays her extended family. I have a cabin in NC near
where she was born.
Mrs P 4 out of 5 stars
Early Mountain living
Reviewed in the United States on December 3, 2015
Good reading of the Trials people had in early settlement of North
Carolina. Lived by real people. Recommend the reading of the other
related books too.
debra allen 5 out of 5 stars Five Stars
Reviewed in the United States on May 23, 2017
Love reading Amy Ammons Garza books."
J. Thomas 5 out of 5 stars
Sterlen and a Mosaic of Mountain Women –
An Unexpectedly Exciting Read
Reviewed in the United States on December 20, 2013
Format: Paperback
Amy Ammons Garza blew my socks off with her amazingly well-drawn
characters and intriguing story line. I had expected a sedate story
set in the mountains. Sterlen and a Mosaic of Mountain Women was
indeed set in the mountains, but it was so much more than that. The
characters brought to life the mores, language and culture of
mountain life. Not only was the story true to that way of life, but
the characters were remarkably well drawn. Although the story’s
title suggests that it is mainly about a character named Sterlen,
it seemed to me that it was really the story of one of those
mountain women. The book opens with a visit by a folkloric-style
mountain man bringing his gift of music and song to a family in
rural North Carolina. The entire family was featured prominently in
the story, but the one to watch was the dark and silent young woman
named Marthie. Marthie turns out to have lived through a series of
overwhelming traumas. As the story progresses, we find out the
depth of those experiences. But Sterlen has fallen in love with
Marthie, almost at first sight. The rest of the story revolves
around their courtship and how Marthie, with Stelen’s help,
resolves her inner struggles. At first, I was skeptical of the
story. It had a few technical issues that I immediately found
off-putting. For example, the author used passive voice
occasionally. She also sometimes slipped into mountain-speak during
the narrative portions of the story. However, by the second chapter
I was so intrigued with the dramatic twists and turns of the story
and the marvelously rich character development that I no longer
noticed those minor problems. The story seemed to leap off the
pages and directly into my imagination. The book’s supreme
readability and intricate story line left me wanting more. I would
love to read a similar book about any of the mountain people
featured in the book. And, even though the story was based on true
events, I suspect that if the author writes more about the Ammons
family, I will find myself as wrapped up in the storytelling as I
was with this amazing book. I heartily recommend this beautiful
story.